You write the most gorgeously crafted stories that have this...it's like (and please don't be insulted, please....) a really amazing shot in a movie, where they do something to the focus and it goes soft and white, yet every word is focussed because your attention is on the words then, not the image.
*wrinkles nose* That sounded better in my head. It's an image of how I see your writing, and not a very good one. I just read the one you wrote for ...was it Zee? In the exchange. Erestor/Glor doesn't spin my wheels at all, but that's not what struck me in that story. What stays with me is the garden, the way they reclaim the house, and go for the ride and ... You paint pictures with words. Those are what stay with me.
You so, so, SO do not suck!!
(and what was the name you asked us to use? I know it's not Tam. Bad me, I was being anti-social when you posted *sigh*)
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Date: May. 21st, 2013 09:14 pm (UTC)*wrinkles nose* That sounded better in my head. It's an image of how I see your writing, and not a very good one. I just read the one you wrote for ...was it Zee? In the exchange. Erestor/Glor doesn't spin my wheels at all, but that's not what struck me in that story. What stays with me is the garden, the way they reclaim the house, and go for the ride and ... You paint pictures with words. Those are what stay with me.
You so, so, SO do not suck!!
(and what was the name you asked us to use? I know it's not Tam. Bad me, I was being anti-social when you posted *sigh*)